Very Repetitive and not easy to follow
The drums are not easily heard and every track sounds to be running into each other. All I can distinctly hear is the high pitched melodic downscale synth which gets boring very quickly.
My suggestion is to listen to it over again, balance the volumes of the tracks and don't let too many things happen at once. Also instead of having a constant downscaling melodic synth, change it up. Don't repeat something just because it's annoying to change. Trust me it will sound much better if you do these things.