So a decent start here to a decent tune, it really feels differant then most tunes on here, and thats what dew me to it especially the start of this so nice job there. I really like what you did here with the "DRUMS" they really play a big part of the whole tune in my opinion, There was alot of mixture and variaty in this and i really liked that, it was not lacking in anything really, lots of great sounds that you pushed forward in this and thats what did it for me, You presented a decent track here with some unique sounds, and some decent quality it it all, making for a decent track and i really came to enjoy it right from the start. anyways good tune here.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As for improving on this, not sure but i may have a few ideas, but not much as these tunes are pretty solid on there own and do very well stand alone aswell. I guess if anything can be improved it would be more on asense to stretch it out longer and even adding more variaty would be a plus.