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Jan 29, 2012 | 1:23 AM EST
File Info
3.6 MB
3 min 54 sec
3.82 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Rated 3.82 / 5 stars
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355 Plays | 20 Downloads
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Electronic - Dance

Author Comments

This is a mix of my own song Rivet so i named it Rivet II. let me know what you think good or bad. Any info is better than no info.

Anyone can use this for anything as long as i get to hear whats made from it :)



Rated 4 / 5 stars

Dance, an optimistic bass bumping feel

The background synth is a bit "static-y" and repetitive. This is a dance song definitely, but sitting here listening it is very boring. From 1:00 to 1:42 I hear the same line. To make a great song you cannot decide to repeat 4 bars multiple times. You need variation, other than that you are set.

Spend more time adding definition and variation, also tighting up everything. By tightening it up, it gives the average listener the ability to hear every track on the song without effort.

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SolidSHAKEgo responds:

Thanks. You seem to know what you're talking about :3 ill take the advice and improve. Feel free to criticize my other songs too if you're bored. I know some are better than others.