decent loop bro, I would have taken out some of the higher stuff around 1min, and thrown in some more technical bass lines from 40-50, and added a drum track and lengthened the whole thing for more of a song, this isn't much for ambient, but has a good feel that dissipates around :23
Who wouldn't liek this? It's awsome!!
I hope you won't get angry at me but I used it in my Minecraft video :3
It's on YouTube name: GladosCraft - Surface Tour
Not mad at all, i take it as a complement =], thanks for giving credit too! i wish i could appreciate the significance, but i don't play Minecraft lol. Im a noob, Runescape all the way! haha.
I'm no composer but....
Overall, the song mixes well together. Sounds like some kind of anime adventure, like the video game "Tales of Vesparia" if you've ever played it. In my unprofessional opinion, it's good, but it could be better and here's how:
At 0:37-0:38 there's this lag in the new melodic part. WTF is that there for dude? ;-) but seriously I found that a bit jarring.
Nice change at 0:55 with the lighter melody.
The song is pretty short, so perhaps you can try to change the background towards the end a bit to make it progress?
I hope that helps. Pretty good start for just beginning compared to some of the stuff that's on here.
Haha =] thank you such much for your response, i actually am not done making this song but i got bored of it so i moved on, so it will be longer eventually. . . lol, but i appreciate the the advice and take it to heart, ill keep it in mind when im working on it again :)