Been working on this song for a while... Maybe its done? I may come back and improve on it later, but I'm pretty happy with how it turned out.
Alright, real review.
You haven't added much to this song excluding the drums. Even there you lacked in the most important part - the kick. It had no kick, it was just a roll over. Although everything else about the drums I admired.
Lay off the crusher, it looses its effect if it's done way too much. What you added in the end what seemed like a few chords were doing okay then you started to hit some bad notes.
Keep working at it. It was better than my first attempt at this song.
Hmm, bad notes...? At the end i was trying to go for like a creepy thing gradually building in dissonance (see the intro to Majora's Mask). That kind of writing is new to me so I guess it just needs more work to get it right.
I'll take the less crusher advice into consideration too, and ill add a kick. Thanks a lot for the review!
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