Seems kinda awkward.
I think its feeling awkward to me because of the tempo. Defenately needs to be faster, obviously purist dubstep is 140bpm, but then alot of post-dubstep is doing 120 stuff now.
Because its so slow, it makes the hihat stick out like a sore thumb to me. It is exactly the same the whole way through the song.. except volume changes. Alot of dubstep makes use of triplets to make the hihats sound interesting, sort of with the same effect, shakers are commonly used as well.
My last comment on it, is there seems to be a massive gap where the low end bass should be. It needs some sub-bass maann! ;) especially when the mid range synth (the 'wub') is on its higher notes it just leaves a mmasssive gap and makes the track sound empty.
So yeh, its a good basis of a track. I personally think the track would sound better at a faster tempo, also needs some sub-bass, and some more interesting parts to the drums.
It has sub bass, but maybe the mid range overpowers it. And oh yea the song was at 100bpm, which may explain why it was a bit slow, I'll turn up the bpm and alternate velocitys on the hihats next time, thanks so much for the input man, you have no idea hoiw much it means to me.
Pretty nice! needs a new title tho!
I like your usage of going high to low not choppy at all! Low to high is great too love the beginning For real! I sort of got put down a little hearing the constant replay of the exact beat though. Too repetitive i could snip and replay this and get the same output as of 00:43 to 01:14 just replay that and you get the majority.
Thanks so much for the comment! Yea i got a little impatient in the end there so I C&P'd alot. Next time I'll make sure not to get ahead of myself!
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