some of your notes seem.. questionable.. but kudos to that very funkesque feel..
and hahaha.. the vocals
and ROFL you goof hahaha.. just listened to what the vocals actually said hahaha..
overall I gotta say this is a pretty sweet submission - I like how you went with the gritty vocal sound - reminds me of like.. muse.. or NIN. :P
I still can't tell what you're saying in it sometimes though hahaha..