Hmmm ... for a first one its nice.
You realy must add more sfx's or just FX.
Also more sounds and melodies needed , and its kind of loopy.
Althou i like the bass.
No offence but it feels like a persone who made this has 1< years exp.
Keep making and you'll amaze your self sometime.
Good luck !
Lol, I am totally aware of the complete crappiness of this submission. This was like the first thing I had ever done and frankly I'm somewhat embarassed about it ;). I don't really know how to delete so...