It's up beat
makes me want to do something crazy
1.) It's good, but I wouldn't call it hardstyle, more like gabber hardcore.
2.) I like the screams.
3.) Maybe some pads in the background would be nice--give the song a little more depth, as it sounds kinda bare bones.
4.) Make it LOUD!
I think that's about it. Hopefully, if you're not gonna remake this track, you might take my comments into consideration for any future tracks :D