It's Your best submission for now :)
Dope. Good broken beats and glitches. Lovely melodies.
If you get a chance, check out Kashiwa Daisuke (If you haven't already) and his album "Program Music". Some of the sequencing you've done vaguely reminds me of some of his stuff - Mainly the stuff that begins at 1:54, and to narrow that down more - the percussion, the sound of them. I think you'd like his stuff.
Thank you for the suggestion!! I checked Kashiwa out, and I really like it!! I dig this! Of course, it helps to turn the volume up and wear my hearing aids, so I can catch all the little glitches and high notes, haha :P
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.