This is sweet! I love the melody and pretty much everything about this.
It just feels very... unfinished, as if you just gave up on it at the end.
Thank you for your kind words! Hmm... well the flp no longer exists, but I'll keep this finishing it in my mind.
1. Nice name for the song. It's fiting.
2. I was gonna say something about adding a bass booster, to the drums, but it sounds okay when the the bassline comes in. But a slight one may still help ya.
3. I like your instrument choices and composition style...ESPECIAlly when the piano comes in.
4.It ends too Abruptly IMHO.
Nice job with this song. Keep it up
Thanks a lot mang! Can't wait to release my new stuff + I may finish this up into a full tune!