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This is for a friend of mine.She asked me to make a new song for her birthday so... here it is! (again) :D
Hope you like the new one and happy birthday!

Vote and leave your comments if you like it :P

- Jumper


I loved it! It's AWESOME. Bet your friend liked it ;) The only thing I would criticize on is that the melody is a bit too repetitive. Try using different verses. Other than that, it's pretty much perfect! :D

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Jumper responds:

Thanks a lot for the comment! This reminds me of when I was beginning in music production lol.. It is pretty repetitive, I agree with you on that point xD. You can check out my recent uploads if you want to. I'm sure you'll like them. A couple of things have changed since then. :P

Great choice of synths

I think your friend is really gonna like this song. Now onto the criticism.....

Melody- Very nice, especially when all the instruments come in.
Harmony- My favorite aspect of the song, I have a weakness for the chords you used here.
Instruments- As I already said, the synth choices are excellent. They blend together well.
Rhythm- Honestly, aside from the variances, it's kinda generic, but I wouldn't expect anything else from a hip-hop beat. And btw, just because it's generic doesn't mean it's not good.
Beginning- I would have liked a cymbal roll or something else to really lead into the main section but what you have there works quite well.
End- The end is fine, it does kind of end suddenly and I would have liked to hear a section without drums or very little drums at the end, but that's a personal preference.

All in all, 9.5/10. Nice man, I'm sure she appreciated. BTW, she better be more than a friend if you made this for her, if you know what I mean ;)

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Jumper responds:

Wow Thank you a lot for the review. It helps a lot! :D

In fact, she is just a good friend but when it comes to do something for someone, I try to do my best. :P

Thanks again!

- [J]

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Credits & Info


4.30 / 5.00

Jan 15, 2012
7:50 PM EST
Hip Hop - Modern
File Info
2.5 MB
2 min 10 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.