I loved it! It's AWESOME. Bet your friend liked it ;) The only thing I would criticize on is that the melody is a bit too repetitive. Try using different verses. Other than that, it's pretty much perfect! :D
Thanks a lot for the comment! This reminds me of when I was beginning in music production lol.. It is pretty repetitive, I agree with you on that point xD. You can check out my recent uploads if you want to. I'm sure you'll like them. A couple of things have changed since then. :P
Great choice of synths
I think your friend is really gonna like this song. Now onto the criticism.....
Melody- Very nice, especially when all the instruments come in.
Harmony- My favorite aspect of the song, I have a weakness for the chords you used here.
Instruments- As I already said, the synth choices are excellent. They blend together well.
Rhythm- Honestly, aside from the variances, it's kinda generic, but I wouldn't expect anything else from a hip-hop beat. And btw, just because it's generic doesn't mean it's not good.
Beginning- I would have liked a cymbal roll or something else to really lead into the main section but what you have there works quite well.
End- The end is fine, it does kind of end suddenly and I would have liked to hear a section without drums or very little drums at the end, but that's a personal preference.
All in all, 9.5/10. Nice man, I'm sure she appreciated. BTW, she better be more than a friend if you made this for her, if you know what I mean ;)
Review for a review?
Wow Thank you a lot for the review. It helps a lot! :D
In fact, she is just a good friend but when it comes to do something for someone, I try to do my best. :P