This is pretty good, but It needs more to it. Its a 3 minute song, but it doesn't really have 3 minutes of content. The song doesn't really change that much throughout, and it ends pretty abruptly. I really liked the part starting at about 2:45, and the song itself is good overall. Don't give up though. You have some definite talent, you just need to keep making more music, and you'll get much better.
This track was actually a slow builder designed on the baseline players progress at a game I created as my senior project.
NYAN NYAN NYAN! I LIEK F-777 MUSIC BUT THIS ONE TOO BORING
F-777 was my inspiration and is credited as a manager of this track for his support through the trial of making it. He is an inspiration to many people and I consider him a really good friend for that support. This is entirely my project so dont discredit F-777 for how "boring" it is and etc. He was the inspiration and support I needed to get through it. I credit him as so because I think highly of him.
Also please elaborate on what you think of this track I need feedback. I am sure to be able to get it from F-777 but I dont like disrupting him constantly to ask for feedback.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.