This is pretty good, but It needs more to it. Its a 3 minute song, but it doesn't really have 3 minutes of content. The song doesn't really change that much throughout, and it ends pretty abruptly. I really liked the part starting at about 2:45, and the song itself is good overall. Don't give up though. You have some definite talent, you just need to keep making more music, and you'll get much better.