Its still good.
You know what is wrong with it so Im just going to tell you good job for trying. All of the melodies and sounds seem to be at the right pitch so all you need to fix is your timing.
This is an extremely rough version of the Terminator theme I did a little while ago, but I still kind of like it. I see places for extreme improvement, it's just not something I've got around to yet. I think the original piece is one of the best composed pieces I've ever heard, so I just wanted to give it a try. There's a lot of odd timing and small detail that I still haven't gotten down, and my sound choice isn't superb, but it's still a good quick listen.
Its still good.
You know what is wrong with it so Im just going to tell you good job for trying. All of the melodies and sounds seem to be at the right pitch so all you need to fix is your timing.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.