Bobby you got a really good song here. You gotta watch out for those vocals though, you dont want it to overpower the melody and beat. Definitely the vocals stand out more than the beat and the melody. Try and lower the vocals and try to somehow blend the vocals in with the melody. Can't really explain how, but I hope this review would help. Just keep the melody and beat your foundation first and dont let the vocals stand out too much. It's good to have, but when there is too much or when it stands out especially this song because this song is more of a chill vibe you dont want too much dynamics from the vocal. Good luck bro, and we gotta make a legit crew one day.
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