I love your leads and your melody. Very well done.
The offbeat wobble bass needs a lot of work. It would probably work into the mix better if you had it wobble to the beat instead of to an off beat. That way you get your kicks and snares to hit on troughs or peaks instead of somewhere in between, which is less epic most of the time.
If you wanna keep it off beat, then I'd suggesting a different timbre. Perhaps one with more release or tightening up the sound with a higher frequency/pitch on some parts.
It looks to be a very good song in the works, nevertheless. So keep at it!