Cud be a whole lot better though, this is the worse track of the three vo it's still a gud attempt. Basically it's a really muddled mix, things are far too close and u lose alot of clarity that wud be there with the use of panning and just reigning things in a lil.
i heard a lil clipping too, which is a sign of things being to loud, roll off ur sub frequencies with a low cut, anything pretty much under 100hz as they're just sub frequencies and all they do is eat up ur head room without being audible.
again apply ur bass as well, besides ur drums in a track the bass is what catches ur audience, then ur melody line, a combination of all three is what makes a gud track into a great track.
keep on coming. and have a listen to my stuff.
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