Yes the length of this track is good and I like the melody as well :) now to be called hardstyle it needs more power in it, maybe a harder harcore drum or what ever it's called :P I hope you get what I mean I've never done this kind of music so I'm not sure what everything is called :P but I've listen to alot of music in this style. I hope you find this kind of helpfull despite my lack of knowleage in making this kind of music :)
Thanks i was writing you a long response, but it died, so here is a short one, its hard to make a good kick and i have little expiriance with it, hopefully it will get better and better! + This is supposed to be more of a power sub with distortion kick, so if your headphones or speakers don't make bass, you arn't hearing it how its indended to be. (80% of my kick is sub)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.