not too good
good and bad
I like it except for the guitar work... something about the way you mixed it made a potentially great song sound like crap. you have very original vocal styles, i have to give you that. maybe if you mix it again and run it through some EQ it will sound as good as it could have been.
I'd recognize that HEAVYGTR NN19 patch anywhere (correct me if I'm wrong, though :P).
Anyway, the last guy pretty much said what needs to be said.
What you have done isn't bad, but alot of the instruments seem to be stepping on one another. The drumkit could do with a bit more definition, as that tends to drive most industrial music.
With the distortion unit over your guit, try adding more presence and less mid, lower the output vol aswell, as it tends to just own everything..
Dynamics are nice to throw in aswell.
Keep it up!