Quality...
This sounds really interesting, however, I do agree that the quality is lacking. When the song begins, it seems to be a bit harsh on the treble, and the vocals are very low and lost within the instruments. If it weren't for your lyric chart, I wouldn't have any idea what the words were. However, if this was all recorded live, I can understand the difficulty in capturing a good quality recording. I'm not sure what resources you have available to you regarding choral singers, but for the sake of re-recording, re-mixing you might want to consider rearranging this piece for perhaps a quartet or quintet or small chamber, with all voices within your vocal range, but thats just an observation in opinion. Other than that, I really would like to hear this in better quality. From what I can hear, I like your compositional style. Keep it up!
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