This sounds really interesting, however, I do agree that the quality is lacking. When the song begins, it seems to be a bit harsh on the treble, and the vocals are very low and lost within the instruments. If it weren't for your lyric chart, I wouldn't have any idea what the words were. However, if this was all recorded live, I can understand the difficulty in capturing a good quality recording. I'm not sure what resources you have available to you regarding choral singers, but for the sake of re-recording, re-mixing you might want to consider rearranging this piece for perhaps a quartet or quintet or small chamber, with all voices within your vocal range, but thats just an observation in opinion. Other than that, I really would like to hear this in better quality. From what I can hear, I like your compositional style. Keep it up!
Thanks so much for taking the time to review. I really appreciate that.
And yeah, I really messed it up when trying to do some EQ on it. That's usually the part when I mess up most of my songs because of inexperience I guess. I see what you mean though. Most people I know are saying the same thing about not being able to understand the lyrics at all. It was the same with the last choral piece that I did. But yeah. You are right. I agree that the song should probably only be sung by a few people. Perhaps that is what I will do next. As for resources, well I just have a mic and my voice really, so it can be edited and changed around if I ever got the time to, which might happen later on. Thank you again. There will be more similarly styled pieces in the future.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.