Cinematic with a taste of Romantic!
Excellent piece here, I love the massive dynamic changes in the piece. I honestly think you hit the character of Mercutio on the head... his comic manners, his untimely death... but the thing I love the most is the early Romantic feel it expresses in the chord progression selections... it's extremely fitting with the time of shakespeare, yet the dynamic style is late Romantic/early contemporary... it's truly an amazing piece.
The only improvement would be to find some better virtual instruments... which is a rather costly and subjective task, so it certainly can be ignored if your main focus is performance instead of digital composition.
Keep up the good work. :)