pretty cool song man, i like the heavy bassy approach you took on this one. i liked the passage starting at 1:12 and the one at 2:11. drums sound really badass as well, hits you in the face, just the way i like it haha.
i can tell you've been experimenting a bit, which is a very good thing. a bit unpolished, but as a whole i really enjoyed the song. this sure as hell doesn't deserve a score of fucking 0, so have a 5. it's on me. keep it up man \m/