AW YES THIS I LIKE
Thank ya kindly, sir
Definitely like the beginning but the the beat hit me. little slow for my taste but over all not bad.
Thanks a lot man.
Reminds me a bit of the music I used to write a while back :P
Anyway, in terms of mastering, all the sounds go well together. I couldn't detect any clipping, which is good. No overkill of effects, which is nice for a change.
Now, about the music itself. It's not really 'listening music', and would be better used in a short movie or game. You tend to use the same motif through a large part of the song. That is not a bad thing per se, so long as there is something to alternate it with, which is currently lacking a bit. If you added more variety in between, I think it would've been better. I do like the change at 1:40 though. If you added more parts like that, it would be a huge improvement to the overall piece.
The ending is a bit strange though. I'm not sure what you wanted to do with that? I think it would have been better if you left out the final drum part, and just ended it with that fading delay of the synth.
Also, put some more effort into your description man! xD You should look at it as your own personal business card.
Anyhow, all in all I quite like it, so here's a 7/10 and 4/5 for you ;)
I really appreciate the comment. This is definitely the most CONSTRUCTIVE response that I've received on my music, and I thank you. I've been creating music for a while now, and I'm trying to tweak my musical imperfections, which happens to be a lot of tweaking. I really agree with what you said about it being repetitive, and that happens mostly out of fear that I might ruin the entire piece. Anyway, I'm kind of rambling. Thank you so much!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.