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Broken (J.A.C.)

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This is a short "emo" song (if you will) about a woman losing her husband. At first this was not the intended direction with the song but I noticed it had a sad vibe to it so I decided to make it a sad song. Made the drum beat back in 08 but never made a song out of it till now. This is a bit different from my other stuff. Also the first verse is from a poem I found online so credits go to the author "Santana Hayes" and the rest is my own. Feel free to leave comments!!

She wore a broken smile
For just a little while
She wore it everyday
A simple shade of grey

And as she saw him, go away
She yelled his name
He looked back once and smiled
But never returned that day

She felt so alone
She went out of control
Not knowing where he was
But sad news came to pass

He never got to say
The words that meant so much to him
"I love You"

- J.A.C. -


The lyrics werent as good as the song i think if you used less echo and made it a better deeper it would be better but thats my opinion but pretty good nice job overall.

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Credits & Info

4.64 / 5.00

Dec 23, 2011
10:07 PM EST
File Info
2.9 MB
2 min 34 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.