Rather nice. :)
But in general, I find it really repetitive. Also, it's really easy to hear that you've use some presets.
I believe it could stand out much more if you didn't put that kickdown in every beat, it kills it rather much in my opinion.
But don't let that stop you! It simply takes experience. I've been there...
Keep it up, and you'll get there eventually!
3/6 - 6/10
Also, I find the start drums rather nice, if that's what you asked about. :)