Good stuff but you can make it work much better
You are a neat guitar player, so cheers for that. Please tune it better next time, especially the intro slices through my ear drums... :)
About the drumming - aside from that they're too loud in the mix in my opinion - it seems to me like you recorded them directly from playing them on a keyboard. You deserve a pat on the back for the way you put a solid drum sound together. However, it goes out of tempo a lot, and then you probably had to adjust your guitar playing to it. It might be the other way around, but it's a pity because it really distracted me.
I don't know what software you use to record it, but most recording programs have some kind of grid function to polish MIDI-based recording into a solid tempo. Try experimenting with that, or just develop the skill to create a whole drum score in a fixed tempo.
I hope you continue making stuff because it sounds like you could become a worthy, authentic addition to the portal. Keep it up!
I'm not by a long shot suggesting that my music is perfect or that I have established myself here - please check out my stuff and feel free to point out any flaw you can find :)
3/5 for now for this song, but I'll try to keep an eye on your progress. Peace.
It’s totally the other way around, Well I am not as good a you though (I’ve heard some of your stuff and you are too good man in my opinion)
Almost all of my song I recorded directly from playing (Live)
The software I used for the midi is Creative Rhythmania (Comes it the Creative Sound Blaster Sound Card)
So I recorded the guitar, bass and lead one by one and then playing all simultaneously lastly the drum (Creative Rhythmania) using a computer keyboard (not a midi device).
Its not consistent and off beat sometime but one thing for sure it feels good as if I were jamming in the studio especially when
I turn the volume up yeah.
Currently I am learning various music studio through a lot demo online and there’s a lot and very confusing the first song created was Ice Love (baby) yet I still don’t quite get it yet with the loop thing specially the note stuff, any way I’m learning maybe in month or so I probably get it. Any way thanks for the reviews.