This is a song with a hypnotic sound!!!
There were a few times where it seemed like the voices weren't quite lining up with the music. The female voice also seemed a little subdued. It may have been a character choice, but I'd be interested to hear her sing out with a fuller voice.
Overall, it sounds really good. You don't hear a lot of vocals here in the Audio Portal, so kudos on that. Keep up the good work!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.