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Uploaded
Dec 19, 2011 | 8:18 PM EST
File Info
Song
4.5 MB
3 min 55 sec
Score
2.44 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Score:
Rated 2.44 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
331 Plays | 15 Downloads
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Author Comments

My second song. I think this song is much better than my last one.
This one is more peaceful.
I'm not sure which genre this would go in,and I'm not sure if the title really fits the mood of the song.
If people could give me help with these two things,that would be great.
I would also like lots of critique.

Reviews


audiomastaaudiomasta

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Great ideas!

Hi desune, sweet track.

If any genre would fit this track it would probably be trance as the elements of a great trance track are all here. What just needs a tune up is the general mastering of this track in general. I can hear the layering of the synth, piano, and kick but it seems your levels are a little out and because of this the kick is being left out of the mix slightly. Try work on the sound levels for a more balanced sound, compression helps here.

Your melodic sense is fantastic as I can hear in the melodies in this track, but the breakdowns and clear transitions from idea to idea needs to be re-enforced more clearly as the build-ups and breakdowns that characterize modern trance music do.

The structure of this track is well outlined and executed and your layering of sounds is good, I hope to hear more from you in the future.


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desune responds:

Thanks for my first review. :)
I'm only now getting the hang of fl studio,and am happy that you have such nice things to say about this,as I don't think this is nearly as good as the more "professional" songs on newgrounds.I'll keep your advice in mind.