This summary thing is pissing me off
I like it a lot!
In the beginning, however, I would change up a few things.
You have it going down the scale for each bar. Kind of a do-du-dahhhhhh sort of beat. I would suggest, on the 3rd bar for that rhythm, have it start up higher on the scale and go down. Making it kind of like de-da-dohhhh. If that makes any sense. :D
If it doesn't make any sense, just PM me and I can show you what I mean lol.
Either way, it needs to pick up at some parts as well. Towards the end, it really should be going much faster, even if it's just more drums. But it's really missing some speed at that part.
Either way, I liked it overall. Good melody, good idea, and good potential.
Thank you :D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.