I see you're a beginner (as is everyone with dubstep lol) and you have a lot of the basics down. The intro was nice and the drop was quick in simple but I thought it fit in really well so nice job on that. After the drop it was pretty repetitive but not awful. Mainly you need to working on eqing and stuff because the entire sounds is pretty muffled. If you work on making it all stand out more it should sound really great!
Thanks! Maybe when I get me a decent set of haedphones it will be easier for me to eq everything lol. Also different plugins might help too lol. Anyway, thanks again for the review!