It's better than the demo. Maybe the channeling needs to be a little more interesting.
I like it!
Nice work on the beat, it seems your really getting used to a steady beat. The synths were a little too "up and down" if you know what i mean, but i still like it.
i think your problem may be that the beats are to choppy. its not smoothe... make each beat fade a bit and place them closer togeather
.... just what i think