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Was going for a tune to just chill out to, like a water-y theme, or maybe the kind of thing you'd hear as BGM for a save point in a game. Turned out pretty well. Still, I might do more with this one, so maybe consider it a work in progress?

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Pretty good

First of, your track has very nice 'warm and soothing' feel to it. Quite relaxing, to be honest. I think it would work fine for a menu or something, though not as much in-game. It's slightly too monotonous for that.

Which is also basically my first point of criticism. There's quite a bit of variety, yet nothing 'spectacular' seems to happen. After listening to it a couple of times, it became mildly boring. Perhaps if you made it longer and added a few new things, it'd be much better.

In terms of mastering, the only thing that sounds a bit off are the drums. The hi-hat and snare drum could be a bit 'softer' to blend more with the rest of the piece. Other than that, you did well!

Not a lot more I can say about it. All in all, I quite like it, though there are a few things that you could work on to make it even better. All in all, 4/5 & 7/10.

Turtlekid1 responds:

Yeah, monotony is probably one of the most persistent flaws in my music.

Definitely appreciate the review, I'll have to keep it in mind. Thanks!

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Dec 17, 2011
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