I liked it, gave you a 4 considering the 2 hour limit. I'm impressed. I'm thinking about taking you up on that challenge, I'll be sure to send something over if I do!
I think you should continue with ..
Its seems to have potential. Your wubs and synths are good and fit the rythem of the percussian. Why a 7 you say? It badly BADLY! needs mixed and mastered properly its just clipping all the way through the song.
Well, as i said. Two hours. :)