Try out some variety!
All you need here is a really nice bridge that is separate from the chord progression you had throughout the piece! The song started to drag on a bit for me because of a lack of development in countermelody, etc. I encourage you to explore that; new synths, new lines, new bass! Try it out!
TheMerelyHuman (formerly known as Smurfbeatz)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.