It's ok ;)
Good dude, but I would sugest some sinth with a real melody or if you wanted it to be just a percussion song then you need to fill it up with all kinds of shit! Add a powerful kick, nevertheless I liked it - you have potential 4/5.
If you have time - you can check some of mine stuff.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.