I wish you could find out what sin this guy was talking about. It's been awhile since I've heard a straight voice demo. Your voice is awesome in this. You sound just like the demon in the "Reincarnation" series. Are you that character's voice? I guess small demon voices have become like this.
I would have loved to see this as an intro to a game or something. You really know how to enunciate. My voice demo has the lowest rating of anything I've seen on this website! The transitions are nicely done. I just play Chinese checkers.