AMAZING, SIR! I felt like you could do a little more but, still an instant favorite! Keep up the good work!
TSFH is the greatest thing that has come upon this earth, and this, good sir. Is most certainly reminiscent of them! Seriously, this is legit. Contact an agent!
I love this. ^^ It has lots of emotion.
Not to knock, but it's the exact same intro to Apologize by OneRepublic.
Well, not to counter-knock, but it really isn't. I just listened to that song on youtube and it's not even close.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.