I see what you're doing here
I like the unit dong of it just not how it's put together. At first, in the beginning, it's more together, but as it progresses it starts to lose he sense of wholeness it has. I just really think there's too much going on. A better name would be "The computer has just crashed" :/
I'm still trying to get better, and will probably wind up deleting this in the next month or so.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.