Took advice from folks on NG, and worked to make a more coherent/simpler tune. I ended up with this, and I am quite happy with the results. Dunno about you guys, but it has a definite hip-hop type feel to me. I think it may be one of my best tracks yet. Let me know what you all think, and if you use it in an animation, please credit to WallofYawn(chrishumphrey) on NG.