I guess I was expecting lyrics or something, but this wasn't bad at all. I thought it was nice how it did seem to have a theme shift about 3 minutes in, as it was getting a little rebundant. I couldn't quite tell what tone you were trying to make. I was thinking it may have been perhaps goofiness or a casual day in life or something like that? Whatever the tone, it works well for what it's supposed to be. Some of the sound effects (the ringing) were pretty funny.
I enjoy th peppiness. I can play the main bits on guitar, cuz they make me happy. :D Good work. I hope you pump out some more stuffs soon.
youve got an funky melody house song, your right the bass is cool,
It reminds me of an song on lemmins, this song does.
Try and techno song mate, see what you like at it.
make another one like this, cool.
dj dragon, strafoxtechno.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.