O.o. Better, and better...
I really like your intro synth. Now let me tell you, what you've got here is pretty damn good. Aside from the fact that your kick / sound production isn't top notch. WHICH is something that doesn't happen very fast. You're making so much progress every song it amazes me. Invest in a good computer for producing, and some speakers.
Oh, don't get me wrong with your sound production. You're improving a LOT every time. And your kicks sound a whole lot better then my first few did. Also, once you start getting very very comfortable with your DaW start working on researching mixing, mixdowns. I can hear a lot of Peaking in this song. Once again something that doesn't come right away.
If you ever need tips, or help. Just ask me, I'll do my best to help you!
Keep the ideas growing, and don't stop!