Not bad at all =p
Ide like to hear more stuff like this all i can say is that more bass would be good and maybe change up the melody a bit more but that's all you man, really good job tho regardless there is much skill here.
Thanks BRO, Yea one of my friends told me the exact same thing about the bass. Ima definently add that bass everyone wants!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.