very nice guitar pyrotechnics there mate, nothing wrong with a bit of fret wanking lol. metal aint ma thing but its all very good. i think it needs some drums and supporting instrumentation. it all feels a bit 'squashed' together the mix, it need some space for all the bits to breath, besides that its very good.
pitters (indie section if you ever wanna listen/review)
Fcuk! SWEET. I love the sound...put drums to it..Be the baddest fuck of a song ever EVER! or, if you want...I could help out..whatever man...this song is cool!!!!! And finished that Creep Now...posted here...: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=499267
Check it out dude. I think you will like it.
hahaha I would put drums in it but I'm too goddamn lazy to write drum parts.....if you want to write the drum parts for me man that'd be fucking great. then we could get a bassist going on and shit...fuck yeah....I checked out the song man I fucking love your vocals! I still think the guitar is too quiet man but I can still hear you rock! But yeah if you're serious about helping out man I could definately use the help...hook me up with your msn or something if you have one...
4 out of 5 wankerdanks
That sounded pretty cool. Got a little complicated though - too much stuff going on at once. Next time try playing the underriff (heavier one) thru once before soloing overtop, so the listener dosen't get confused. Also since the soloing riff is so interesting, the heavier riff dosen't need to change and go thru as many alterations as it did, that just adds to the confusenment(lol). I was waiting for a time where the heavier guitar and the soloing one would match up and play the same thing . . . that sounds really cool when 2 guitars playing differn't stuff all of a sudden match up together, then go back on different tangents again. By the way nice soloing, thats better than I could ever do
just suggestions, check out some of my songs & tell me what u think(not as good as urs but decent)
Thanks for the compliments man..the reason I didn't harmonize the guitars is because the rythm guitar had way different amp settings and shit (effects and whatnot) and it wouldn't sound right...I throw in a sick harmonized line in my next one for you though....and yeah I'll check out your stuff and leave a few reveiws....