I was really expecting this to sound more like a marching band, but I still like it! Everything blends together pretty well, although I would have liked the flute melody to be more prominent from about 3:30-4:00. Maybe back the chord progression off a little bit there.
I think this would sound really awesome with a more techno-synthesizer sound and feel. Maybe amp up the bass a little bit. Then it would made a really great dance tune, IMO.
Thanks for the review! This is the first time I arrange for marching band, and I don't have access to a lot of very good instrument sounds, so there's only so much I can do ^.^;
In response to your suggestion, this piece was based off another that I wrote, which has a more techno feel to it. You can find it here: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/438051