Eight outta Ten

Originality: Sounded strange, though in a good way.
Diversity: Repeated a little too much. I got bored with it about halfway through.
Clarity: Not much to be said. Good job.
Effort: Considering it was done in 12 days, I don't think it was that bad at all.
Overall: Good, but there was something missing. I can't quite place my finger on what it was. Perhaps if you fixed up the beat to make it a little more danceable it would be better.