Holy smokes there's a lot going on in this song,
The volume is clipping like a mo-fo, the guitar was incredibly off key, and the drums are really repetitive.
Oh god, more guitar (00:40)
I'll admit the only reason I clicked on this song was because it had the word "Neon" in it, and I used to own one of those. Haha.
Please don't try and sell this. But rather work to make it into something great. :) I know you must have the talent somewhere!
Thanks For the Review.
Do you think Changing the guitar to another Instrument that is less powering will help. (And maybe revising the notes a bit? I am still a beginner and I am up for any advise!