Wow the intro guitar(ish sound) and the saw wave matches so well together!
This sounds really awesome! Its very close to some of Glitch Mob's songs
I think you should add something else on at 0:22 and the second chorus part...at 0:22 it sounds a bit empty and at the second chorus part it sounds repetitive. Maybe have that variated synth from the beginning?
Def make it longer! It will sounds really cool once its done! Maybe add a longer bridge part so that the chorus part hits the listener harder and its more pumping (if you know what i mean...)
Keep up the good work!
Wow being compared to the glitch mob is pretty rad :) They're one of my many inspirations for creating music. at 56s this is a pretty short song, maybe one day i'll make it longer?
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.