It's not horrible, but it's not exactly amazing, either. Still, this is good for 3 hours of work. The build up was a bit long for two minutes, in my opinion. At around 0:55 an instrument sounded like it came in too early or too late - I can't say which it was, though it ruined the atmosphere nonetheless. Overall, I can see potential in this song and in you yourself. A little polish and this song could even be a download~. Keep up the good work!
my ears are bleeding
At least leave constructive criticism. Idiot.