Major lol when I read that you recorded this while sick, I'm not surprised. I know you have a thing for recording in one take, which you do pretty well, but I think being sick majorly impacted this one (unsurprisingly). Aside from your ill delivery (har har) one thing that stood out to me was the use of some slightly forced ebonic dialect which made me laugh a little.
I know back when you released this internal rhymes were your bread and butter but I just want to call attention to one line that really stood out to me for content and imagery:
Or a man with a heart full of carbon fission