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Author Comments

I made a beat one day using my keyboard, I loved it and attempt crafting a lyrical song out of it. You can take it as you wish, but to be honest, I don't think my voice is right for this kind of song. I still enjoy the instrumentals though. :P

LYRICS:
Figure in the doorway but not moving
Can't hear the words but voice is so soothing
Cynical nature replacing play acting
So trash the scripts and derail the frail tracking
How am I supposed to know, that all I see is what's real?
So take step back and view the entire deal, and let me ask you...

(Chorus)
How do you feel? x4

Now, don't get me wrong, this isn't a prideful song
And overall, the meanings, they won't take long
... (Hmm)
In fact, forget about it, I've got nothing to say
And deeper meanings are overrated anyway

(Chorus)
Is that how you feel? x2
How do you feel? x2

You and me, about to see, the part of life: Stage Three
And how are you gonna tell me, what I see is not real?
Opinions, complaints, ideals, you cannot steal, and that's the truth
I don't care how you feel, there's no use
Still interesting though, all ideal, so let me ask you...

(Outro)
How do you feel?
How do you feel?
This shit's unreal
I know how you feel
I know it

Reviews


Are you feelin' it now Mr.Crabs?


Jay responds:

Beep Boop Beep.


Neato

I like it. The lyrics are my favorite part of the piece especially the first verse. The thing i like the least is the recording quality/mixing of your voice. It sounds a little "damp", you can hear the sound of you open and closing your mouth much to clearly and the voice has no "depth". Probably just because you don't have a super expensive mic. and recording good quality voices is hard. Some times the volume is a little off in the chorus. Still the overall tone is very nice, very chill and dreamy. Good stuff!


Jay responds:

Yeah I could definitely use a better mic/recording equipment, as well as an actual mixer. But I'm glad that you enjoyed what I made, especially the lyrics, since I like to think of writing as my strong suit.

Thanks very much for the review, I appreciate it!


Meh....

Lyrics were okay, the music complemented your voice (or i guess vice-versa), and the ending fit nicely with the tone (mood?). I dunno how well this works on it own, but i could seriously see this in some sort of drug trip in a movie or something like that...


Jay responds:

Thanks for the imput, I never get reviews.

My favorite part of this piece is the music, and I'd have no problem with someone taking it and putting better vocals/lyrics over it. And yeah, this definitely reminds me of a drug trip as well :P

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Credits & Info

Jay

Jay

Author

Uploaded
Nov 30, 2011
5:17 PM EST
File Info
Song
3.5 MB
3 min 52 sec
Score
3.26 / 5.00

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.